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Lazy_Pen_Master21hRépondu à TatsuyamizuyamaCh 20 Chapter 20: Encounter with Liu Yunxuan- Lazy_Pen_Master1dRépondu à Hardy1j
chi feng, its a title for him when he reach his pinnacle and be famous in world
[Destiny: Stops at Perfection in Divine Transformation Realm, becomes the Hall Master of the Scorching Heaven Hall, honored as Immortal Chi Feng. While seizing the treasures of an ancient cultivator's inheritance site, he was surrounded by several Divine Transformation Realm cultivators. He killed two, severely injured one, but ultimately perished.] - Lazy_Pen_Master1dRépondu à Yogesh1550
i will change it when i reach home
Very soon, only a few people were left here, including Zhang Weihut and Zhao Rou. - Lazy_Pen_Master1dRépondu à Yogesh1550
weihu
Very soon, only a few people were left here, including Zhang Weihut and Zhao Rou. - Lazy_Pen_Master2dCommenté
was he first patient of Stockholm syndrome
"Hahaha! Who would have thought? The mighty Magus Stockholm would be reduced to such a miserable state!" - Lazy_Pen_Master2dRépondu à MR_SYUBHIOCh 14 Chapter 14: Top-Grade Profound Rank Thunder Strike Sword and Soaking in the Medicinal Pool
- Lazy_Pen_Master3dRépondu à Tiovaughn_BeckfordCh 13 Chapter 13: Instantly Killing Lei Xiaojun and Selecting a Weapon
- Lazy_Pen_Master3dRépondu à Tiovaughn_Beckford
there is no thing as luck value here. so he will kill protagonist when he will take his last fate. xiao fans upper limit is fixed at divine transformation realm peak. so Shen mo will kill him and take his chances. when first protagonist dies, it will be revealed why only Shen mo can see the fate and destiny of people with 100% certainty. and main story will start.
Ch 13 Chapter 13: Instantly Killing Lei Xiaojun and Selecting a Weapon - Lazy_Pen_Master3dRépondu à 90Bry
he is talking abiyt divine trial of sphinx.
This was not like memorizing ordinary knowledge or reciting poetry. Otherwise, the nine individuals who passed the second trial before William would not have all failed at this stage. - Lazy_Pen_Master3dRépondu à 90Bry
related to william being arcane god. if you want slight spoiler chat in discord server.
This is the most magnificent treasure left by the legendary arcanist Sphinx! - Lazy_Pen_Master4dRépondu à SwiftescapeCh 12 Chapter 12: Plucking My Wool, Huh? Lei Xiaojun Fled
- Lazy_Pen_Master4dRépondu à 90Bry
sphinx is related to origin of william itself
This is the most magnificent treasure left by the legendary arcanist Sphinx! - Lazy_Pen_Master4dRépondu à 90Bry
i have made all the edits you mentioned till chapter 200 or something. i suddenly had a feeling and decided to edit novel from chapter 1. i am done till 7. so till then, can you join discord through my profile and suggest the edits there? click on my profile
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - Lazy_Pen_Master4dRépondu à Dawn_Lasagna
fixed
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"h-he's smilng?!!!"
'H-he... He's glad?' I thought, shocked by the revelation. It caused my mana to run amok, just like my emotions. - Lazy_Pen_Master4dCommenté
work on pov changes. you could write it in same pov from start. i became confused here
My condition wasn't the worst, however. I still stood my ground despite the pressure and fatigue I felt after the countless battles. - Lazy_Pen_Master4dCommenté
this is contrasting. dazzling and dark cannot be used to describe same thing. just use dark pillar.
Slowly, the dazzling dark light dimmed down, causing the dark figure to become increasingly clear.