Lazered

by the way I'm rlly loving the novel thanks for offering this masterpiece for free

no thats not what I mean, I'm not blabbering on it being reductive or whatever just that idk what it means bc I rlly don't understand.. it let me think of anything with the way u describe it it's like saying 'it was a yellow day' like ok I guess the day was yellow but what does that tell me? but like I said before maybe I misunderstood and u mean to say 'face'rather than physique? perhaps that would make sense bc if u say American physique I might think fat so that is obvious, but for others like 'african ' or 'middle Eastern' I can't think of physiques associated with those 😅

I have a feeling he'll cheat his way through life to become at the top. that would be interesting

I've been wondering tho but what do 'middle Eastern physique' or 'african physique' etc mean?? is that just their face or their body structure, if it'd the first then the wording is a little off it gets me confused

I agree but tbh I think it might make the author lazy with a intricate plot (where things can just be excused as luck lol)

I'm very late but like the other person said, since the comma isn't placed correctly, it is hard to tell, but im 101% sure it means that the 'mystical' place is so grand it cannot compare to something (so small in comparison) like the pyramids

i think i read somewhere u like grammar checks, so uh. this is 6 months old, yes. it is a tiny tiny error, yes. but 'hers' can never have an apostrophe (her'is) - otherwise your saying '..was somehow even more disturbing that her is' (which doesn't make sense)! Remember that for the future!

it's like those stories where someone gets reincarnated from earth and tries implement earth's technology. it just feels good to have something from 'home'

hmm or maybe the actual game is loading a REAL World ... 😳

its a small plothole which probably won't be solved, but i think the story wont be set in other countries in that case? if the author actually manages to find a solution to this without limiting the setting i will be surprised