Vipex_Puka
Lv4
2021-06-06 JointGermany
1.1kh
de la lecture
1231
Lire des livres
Badges
6Moments
148
Vipex_Puka5 months agoCommentéNice Name. PS. it's also my name
- Vipex_Puka10 months agoCommenté
I really like the story so far, but you could Break the big paragraphs into more smaller ones, like maybe 5 or 6 lines, maybe a bit longer if it fehlst better to read, makes it smoother to read.
- Vipex_Pukaa year agoPosté
I really like what youve done with this world
- Vipex_Pukaa year agoPosté
Its a shame that you re-write, but at the sme time Im excited
- Vipex_Pukaa year agoPosté
really nice ............................
- Vipex_Pukaa year agoCommentéCe livre a été supprimé.
- Vipex_Pukaa year agoRépondu à General_Kenobi_0
A Chaos Demon from Warhammer
- Vipex_Puka2 years agoPosté
I've seen a few mistakes here and there, but overall, this is my favourite work here on this site.Keep going!
- Vipex_Puka2 years agoRépondu à romeotango148
He chose right with a kid like you
- Vipex_Puka2 years agoRépondu à romeotango148
Bro, that's just disrespectfull.Why does your Dad not look for another woman, that's not as ugly and old as your mother huh?