Swan_Reader

In this Fan Fiction, you write that the Main character is getting powerful as he sleeps. With the Limited brain cells you have, you decided to make the MC a Ninja, in which he has to do a task instead of sleeping and getting stronger. Instead, he has to do a mission. You are just forcing your concept into the story; there is no background or any logic. Total waste of a good concept

the story development and concept is very good it's mind blowing and a very new concept but the growth of the main character is lacking he has the okatsuki bloodline but he act like he is very lonely he has a sharingan but Sims for a girl. we all know the sharing gone he was only after intense hatred but he has The Mangekyō Sharingan but still is simping after a girl. we all know female lead is important but just kind of lead which is just force and misleading is not good for the future development of the novel you should just let it be a revenge arc against the girl family or face slapping. it's a good concept but I am not reading it furt her because is too much of a MC being a SIMP and has to many plot holes

Totally garbage. In the beginning, the author showed MC hothead but after 2 chapters he is simply over-colleens it is just an insult. every wannabe author just tries to force MC into canon like Dog in Heat is really important to MC has to befriend the cast . totally a disappointment for Ikaris

I loved your work Nice character design. I think you should increase the word count of each chapter. update more, good read so far. More chapters needed

I think the author is super dumb. super op MC = super dumb intelligence. the guy created advanced AI and built a phantom drive but doesn't have some backbone. I don't have actual reasoning behind this kind of author with good boy type MC always wiggling their tail for good deeds. total disappointment don't read it time waste

what a waste .mc has a powerful system that recruits powerful wizards but still little whip in front of Dumbledore some Chinese logic shitty work. destroyer of eyes don't read this garbage

one of the best boys' fic It has so much potential. update more and increase the word limit. love the work. good work so far waiting for the new chapters. good luck

good read. The character intro is also very good. hope you update more for us. make the chapters long, and increase the word limit. good work author hope you continue this work

shit content. A Nephilim running around scared by a few mutants. come on what the heck is the protagonist hard working through fire shit just say you just stretching your shitty content making much shitter. waste of dante sparada waste of marvel waste of internet waste of time waste of concept totally garbage.

total trash just a MC becames a villain in a game he played 10000 hours acting like simp.its insulting to read this kind of novel .totally garbage