MIDO999

hell no

When will you actually start killing innocent people? And don't tell me you won't. In my country, they say, "He who lives with a people for forty days becomes one of them." This means that as long as you're constantly associated with a certain group, you'll become one of them sooner or later. And as you continue streaming and your streams are watched by various lunatics who enjoy watching death and destruction, you'll start killing innocent people to attract viewers sooner or later, because most live stream viewers prefer to watch destruction, death, and massacres. Or did you think that Joker was one of the best and most powerful streamers because of luck?

A ridiculous attempt to preserve the original plot unchanged. He says he'll protect Ohara at any cost, then Sengoku tells him to go to the New World, and he goes without thinking, even though he knows Ohara's fate. And even after Sengoku's deception is exposed, he doesn't rebel against the Marines. This stupid chapter proves to me that the novel will be no different from the original.

who?

The plot is good, but the AI ​​makes the writing style poetic and exaggerated, such as repeatedly adding words like "absolute" and "fate," making the sentences overly poetic and exaggerated, and repeating the same sentences over and over again. You're writing the paragraphs little by little, and you're having it improve the writing style and correct the grammar, right? It's better to tell it to correct the grammar while keeping the text unchanged. Trust me, that's better. I've reached the section part and that's ruined the story for me.

Guys, let's put the racism aside. I'm neither American nor Chinese, and I prefer Chinese and Japanese barbecue restaurants to any other barbecue restaurant.

The way the AI ​​is being used is very clear. Please tell it not to change its writing style, and please don't write paragraphs that are only one to five words long. Nobody likes to read something like that. The plot of this novel is truly interesting., and I haven't read Fallen Piece before, and the fact that the MC has no connection to Koh is something I rarely see in a novel, then please don't ruin your work with AI. I will delete this review and write another one when the writing style of the novel improves.

The novel absolutely deserves five stars.

this chapter is so fucken peak. damn to this little sand in my eyes