AgniFaradel

The novel is a 3.8, it is neither good nor bad, the general plot is good since it is very similar to Warlock of the magus world but the number of holes in the story and the little planning that the author had took a lot away from the novel , especially the final arc (Spoiler begins) where he jumps from 3 rings to transcend the 9 rings abruptly, leaves a bitter taste that he has prolonged such stupid things and has ignored or skipped many interesting things, such as the development of his inner planes, the astral plane, the zerg plane, the plane of the abyss, a shame

gugu gaga, go cry somewhere else

I guess the story is good so that the only bad review is from a 👶

Someone take the time to make a review like this, it's for a reason, it convinced me to read the story.

As I have seen in other comments, it is a waste of time to explain why the rating. The characters are bad, the plot is meh, the development is meh, the writing quality is average, as is the story.

Are you an npc or why is your comment so absurd?[img=faceslap][img=disgusted]

It's not a bad read, but it's repetitive and in line with another comment, the protagonist seems like an MC from a Chinese novel, slap, slap, slap. I was expecting something more, good luck

Where can I get a girl like that? I'm full of debt 😮‍💨

A week ago I started reading your Weednesday fanfic and I loved it, so I started reading this one and I can say that it is your type of writing that made the stories interesting. Any recommendations for reading?

I usually hate harems, few authors have the ability to write a story with a harem, well, in this story it wouldn't bother me, as a bonus, the story, despite having romance, does not focus solely on that