Darius_Wing

it's a solid-looking story but the author makes it seem like some rushed novel, will be better in the late chapters I hope [img=update][img=update]

it has to do with his emotions,my character is a development type so with time his character will improve,sorcerers are taught to not be affected by their emotions and i dont think any parent will have it in them to tell their parents to become a machine,thanks for reading the novel,feel free ro gimme stones..not the kidney ones

ok,noted

i can understand what you are saying,i was going for what is known as character development ,so that is that,anyways his character will change as time goes,if you look close enough you might even see it,sorry for not putting it out in the open,once you feel that the character has become a bit better,consider editing the review ,thanks 😉

bro you can see in chapter 1 that mc understands his ability from its name but knowing and doing are different things

i will make him smarter to meet your great requirements,even though knows what shrodinger cat is,like in the first chapter where he claims that a name like that should be giving him better ability so he knows about it alright,and you have to see that this aint a gamer system or something,he has to actually train to become stronger and learn his power and thats where overgrow comes into play,it shows him his future potential.i request you to bear with me

just the basic use of his power,

whats yo problem tho

yo! since i am the author my description does not count,anyways i am a new author so a lot of grammar mistakes are present ,i am doing this to earn novel writing experience and creative thinking

, its a developing ability but currwntly it gives him invisibility and the ability to erase projectiles launched at him.its still developing at will follow the theory of shrodinger cat