JairoSTorres

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JairoSTorres3 years ago
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He tasted of something untamed and exhilarating that Maxi could not name. As he pushed his tongue in deeper to taste every corner of her mouth, her chest tingled. She nearly forgot to breathe as she clung to him.
Under the Oak Tree
Fantastique · Suji Kim
JairoSTorres3 years ago
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"Thank you. I will treasure it."
Under the Oak Tree
Fantastique · Suji Kim
JairoSTorres4 years ago
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Don't worry. I don't know anything about the dynasty either 🤣
Ch 8 Stealing from the Thieves
Entangled with An Evil Lord
Fantastique · Mu Danfeng
JairoSTorres4 years ago
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"Even though she had no internal force". Otherwise it makes no sense. And as told already, take away the "but".
Even though she had an internal force in her body, but her response was as quick as lightning!
Entangled with An Evil Lord
Fantastique · Mu Danfeng
JairoSTorres4 years ago
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I had expectations about this story because I saw it everywhere, but I wouldn't have guessed it was this good. The tension is real. The action is so cinematic. And the characters and drama? You connect with it since the very beginning. Totally recommended!
Solo Leveling(Only I level up)
· DUBU (REDICE STUDIO), Chugong, h-goon
JairoSTorres4 years ago
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The story seems intriguing enough to keep going. The flashforward in the beginning sets up an interesting plot to stay interested. Good work! Keep on going!
Godslayer's Legend
Fantastique · _michael
JairoSTorres4 years ago
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I think it sets up the setting and plot very nicely!
Ch 1 Prologue (REWRITTEN)
Godslayer's Legend
Fantastique · _michael

Millie and Ewan: I Will Never Get Married!