[img=coins]I said, you did a good job in writing, you need to fix some grammar, otherwise it's a good story, especially your main character, in your tag you were not put action tag, so I can't say that your story is less of fighting. well, keep it up.

[img=coins]I said, you did a good job in writing, you need to fix some grammar, otherwise it's a good story, especially your main character, in your tag you not put action tag, so I can't say that your story is less of fighting. well, keep it up.