I came up with my idea for my book when I walked my dog, I guess that pretty much just sums me up.
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You may think its cliche, but I implore you to read more of the story .
What do you mean "Eww"
Thanks for letting me know, I just fixed it now
OHHH I GET IT, didn't think about that xD
I have no idea what this is supposed to mean, but I'll take that as a compliment xD
HI! I am really glad you liked my book, I have been extremly busy with school work, but I plan to come back to writing in a couple days. Hope to see you there :D
Also to add, his lines are supposed to be cringe, if that makes sense.
I understand where you are coming from, I don't know how much you've read but yes, the MC thinks he is cool and is overconfident, but soon learns over time that he isn't that strong. I implore you to read the rest of my book and if you still have this opinion let me know. Thanks for the review, but it would be nice to know what you liked as well seeing as you gave me 4 stars.
No, he won't be a fat merman xD.
And Z yeah, hopefully it is still understandable