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That's right, the point is you don't need to read it.

It's true that DXD lacks women, right?

Is there a genderbent?

Well you worshippers that is not right

Keep working on your own ideas, the average reader here if the mc is not beta then all problems are solved, and there are no yuri traps then that's enough, it's just a matter of arranging the words

Cannot replace the role of the original Jinwo, because it is already embedded in the brain that the original Jinwo is better, maybe the good ones are only the harem and r18 parts.

This is bad because Jinwoo, whose personality was already good in the original manwha, became a child mc Class 2

Gendebend ruins the story that is already on its way into a pile of pure garbage.

I suggest to focus on this story rather than MHA. Because it is better to read this than MHA which seems messy.You also have to learn to start shortening the explanations in the character's brain to be inserted later in the next chapter, so that it doesn't seem like it's piling up when the dialogue occurs.Between characters. Try it then your story will be easier to enjoy, the matter of character personality is not a problem for me, the important thing is not beta or yuri, If you start writing paragraphs while you're in the middle of a brainstorm or explanation, you can write in future chapters why the character acted that way, or have them ready. Special flashback chapter between 1 chapter after the problem is solved. Like things in movies where it is not told why the character acts but It was announced after the incident was resolved. I hope you can read my advice.

Where is the picture?