J_Davids

This story gives me the cool vibes of my current favorite animes Like Reincarnated As A Slime or So, I Got Reincarnated As Spider, So What? it's very interesting and nicely imagined. Although there are some misused punctuations and grammatical errors, your story is still very interesting.

Thank you!!

Thank you!!!

thank you! much appreciated!

thank you!!

From the beginning, it is quite interesting and I like how detailed you are with your description as the story goes. There are a few grammar mishaps, but it is a good story!

It is going good so far and I do find this interesting! Although there is a little bit of grammar error, this story shows promise and I am excited to where this story might lead to.

This story shows promise and excitement! I like how you portray the emotions for the main character and I like how the action goes. Though there are some grammar mishaps and spelling, it's got potential! 👌

I have to say I am quite intrigued with this mix of history with gaming like stats! Makes me think of the popular reincarnation animes right now! This shows promise! Liking a lot!

Thank you!!!