I’m really confused as to which one is the dialogue and which is not. Author, haven’t you read other novels before? You should read one before writing one
He took another step towards Scarlet and said in a gentle tone. "I promise you, Miss Scarlet, that I'll make up for all the wrongs I've done to you and treat you like the goddess that you are. Once we are together, we will experience a romance greater than any fairy tale could ever describe, and you will forget all about your past pain and suffering. Just give yourself to me, and I promise to treasure you forever."