Ripun_Aggarwal

There are a lot of things missing from the story that are mentioned but not followed up in the story 1.) Other beasts evolution after top mythic which does not happen in the whole story and no mention after last member becomes top mythical frade. 2.) First there should be no romance or else in case as you have already added it, you should also develop the beasts romance either with the mc as there love gestures in the novel and no private update after getting together in the Primordial eternal realm. 3.) There was a crystal mc gets after defeating the blood emperor shadow, no information after getting it. 4.) No explanation for both dark and light entities each after reaching transandance. Only showing a single entity, which either could be interpreted as a single being mistakenly taken as different beings and information about their other disciples. 5.) No explanation given for the reason of world in world as stated in chapter over the rules.

The story line and the start of the book was good, but later on everything is a jumbled mess, mc is so dumb that every 50 chapters he says that he will improve but no improvement is seen, and had to face the same situation where harem members suffer, then he promises again but faces the same situation over and over again, it has been 350 chapters but we have only met a single succubus who is not awake, there is no plot for mages and there power, mc absorbs power but don't know how to use them without the system, mc only focuses on a single group, and wanted to make them stronger, but have not used the mage power and only guns. around 100 chapters ago he said that the both worlds power should co exist for it to make them stronger, but again noone tried and still the mc group is ignorant of how to use mana and magic . Mc didn't even try to use magic as there is no mention of him even trying to check if he can do it or not. Still world background was good but the story and mc behaviour is not up to par. Serious need of story editing or else the book will keep on going without anything new and thrilling for an isekai novel, Ps. Sorry for my bad grammar,

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