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Interesting story, I look forward to future chapters

At this point, I have not understood anything since the expedition ship failed, and they encountered the storm

seemed interesting, but after he left for the flame and got it, it felt very confusing as if the story was going in one direction and then just immediately went in an entirely different direction that the first couple of chapters

Big Plot Hole Duke Lyon's son Finn works together with mora family in SouthWind City using a blood sacrifice array along with the evil witch pandora to gain power and the sun divine spear in the secret academy realm they don't succeed They only partially succeed because of the protagonists interference, tens of thousands saw this and the city in the process got destroyed and after all this happens Finn the main instigator and villan is not even punished everyone including the author act like it did not happen at all despite the Academy Head Master, City Lord, Academy Guardian Elder, Multiple Teachers City Officials powerful family's of South wind City and tens of thousands of people and after all this everyone including the author act like it did not happen

why is Finn and Duke lyon by extension traitors to the kingdom, and everyone acts like it didn't happen?

So , what Finn has done has not yet reached the king or what?

Why did Su Luo, after defeating the mini boss and gaining the divine paralysis ring, skip to ask if anyone knows where or what the upgrade materials for the ring are? The game has only been on for 2 days. How would anyone know what he is talking about and the whole dungeon you are not clear on ? Does that scammer have the teleport scroll so Su Luo has to go through him to get to the dungeon? 2 days after the start, he somehow has knowledge of the dungeon the pet and shit the only Su Luo should know, yet it seemed like despite being at the top of the ranking at like level 5 or 6+ he doesn't have the strength to clear the dungeon and no one should have the teleport scroll or any knowledge of it or the dungeon it teleports to as well as any potential rewards or enemies 2 FUKIN DAYS AFTER THE GAME JUST STARTED!

Why did you have to kill off Elara? All you have done is make the story terrible now

Is this a harem? Or is it just one girl instead

Terrible grammar and speaking in what seems to be a bad old British English