HatefulAutumnBreez
Allergies...... Vice Leader of the Three Period Gang. I enjoy writing overpowered protaganists.
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HatefulAutumnBreez8mthPostéI don't really care about the romance part of it or whatever review bomb is going on. If you ignore of all of that, the whole fighting part and "cheat" can be pretty entertaining. I especially enjoy the Viral Hit/Manhwa crossovers. There is quite a lot that you could do with that. Please less horny. Please more people getting their heads crushed by barstools basically. Also, add capybara.
- HatefulAutumnBreez8mthCommenté
A Fountain of sentient Capybaras.
Also, suggest some NPCs for the clan base. - HatefulAutumnBreez9mthCommentéCh 121 Chapter 121: Queen’s Gambit
- HatefulAutumnBreez11mthCommentéCh 34 Chapter 29 - First Job (1/2)
- HatefulAutumnBreez11mthCommenté
Water Bowl. How menacing.
Without delay, six ROOT ninjas initiated their jutsu, "Water Release: Water Bowl," causing a copious amount of water to surge forth, rapidly filling the area. The environment became saturated, as if transformed into an expansive water-filled bowl. - HatefulAutumnBreez1yrRépondu à sapient
- HatefulAutumnBreez1yrCommenté
*drowns to death*
However, as the liquid level rose gradually with the infusion of the nutrient solution, Mark simply closed his eyes calmly, with a serene and unwavering expression. From this, one could tell how much confidence Mark had in his own invention. - HatefulAutumnBreez1yrCommenté
Bump, Set, Spike
(Peppering is where two players practice ball control by passing the ball back and forth towards each other. This may also include hitting it towards your partner so they can try to pass it perfectly back.) - HatefulAutumnBreez1yrPosté
Honestly, it is quite mediocre. I’m gonna just say that it isn’t extremely horrendous or anything, it’s just meh. The grammar is readable, and all, but the dialogue feels kinda off. At times it can be a bit monotone and somewhat repetitive. It hollows the characters in some ways. Not to mention the pure monologues. While I know the author most likely wants to be concise and all but it just feels really masochistic to read through everything, something like quantity over quality. It does of course have its good points though, as the humor can be pretty decent at times and the usage of the system is good. Don’t take my word for it though.
- HatefulAutumnBreez1yrCommentéCh 47 Extra: The Interview (Part 3)
- HatefulAutumnBreez1yrCommenté
No respect for art :(
Meanwhile, the Phantom Spider sprinted toward Tombstone and delivered a powerful punch to the giant's face, sending him flying backward and crashing into an art piece. Due to his enhanced strength, he was still alive, though he was dazed. - HatefulAutumnBreez1yrRépondu à ebrahim_bahadeliCh 56 Chapter 13: Definetly Not Excessive Use Of Force
- HatefulAutumnBreez1yrCommentéCh 56 Chapter 13: Definetly Not Excessive Use Of Force
- HatefulAutumnBreez1yrRépondu à mow
That's true I guess.
He soccer kicked the guy in the head and he was out. - HatefulAutumnBreez1yrPosté
Putting aside a few spelling errors, I'm really liking the story. Unlike some other mostly first-person perspective fanfcitions on this platforms, it actually.... Feels. There is personality. You can feel what the main character is feeling in a way. Not to mention the fact that the author completly nailed the explosive personality along with the personality of other characters. For the most part, the imagery is on point and the diction fits. It's also in somewhat of a slow-pace which is nice. Keep up the good work!
- HatefulAutumnBreez1yrRépondu à Sin_of_GREED
- HatefulAutumnBreez1yrRépondu à SagaLF11Ch 49 Chapter 7: Runnin'