Tom_Tat

Did you just steal and translated story from Russian website about Theon? Everything you write is a poor translation of a really good story .

Man if you don't have any creative thoughts in your brain, at least have some decency to not steal someone else work. Pathetic. You should be ashamed. Plagiarism from every sentence.

Interesting character and great plot .What else do you need?

Well, I am surprised Han decided to leave village now. After all he knows the consequences for that, especially in the time of war .

Lyra do it girl! Tell him the truth

I doubt this is the end of Walter involvement.

Just read it. Trust it is something magnificent

Great work. I hope you have a nice break

I think we all know how they catch them. Ori will take that traitor piece by piece when he find him.

Nice, only his parents left to deal with.