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CARTERKANE7dCommentéCh 31 Chapter 31: Decision- CARTERKANE12dCommenté
not really it's just that KS is used by aizen...The ability is not broken because of what it can do but because of is using it..
Bai Ye cleared his mind. If he wanted to get a lot of world origin, he had to start with these people. In a world with many illusion abilities, it would be enough to make up for part of Bai Ye's current abilities. Shinigami are not very resistant to illusion abilities that act on the spiritual level. This was evident from Aizen using 'Kyōka Suigetsu' to almost turn the entire Gotei 13 around. Even the captain needed to be attacked by Aizen to confirm whether what he saw was real through the undeceptive Reiatsu. It was clear that Shinigami's resistance to spiritual-level illusion abilities was really insufficient. - CARTERKANE16dCommenté
Did u delete the book?
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lol made who uneasy exactly?lol.
Bai Ye killed Byakuya Kuchiki, which made her feel uneasy at all. - CARTERKANE20dCommenté
Loving it..Lucifer is like the 2nd most powerful being equal to his brother in DC and second to the presence alone.So even if he looses his power he should still be above humanity..Hope to see more characters like the fantastic 4, x men, the brotherhood, eternals, asgard etc. Hope this will be a long fic..Also can u explain the timeline as of now for both of them?Is this the lucifer from the TV show?If so is it before he met chole or after?
Ch 10 Chapter 9 Wrath - CARTERKANE21dCommenté
Its said that he was the sole being on earth that could bring about true peace and create a paradise. At least in one version that is.
"Alright then, Victor." The Ancient One spoke. "You are quite the interesting individual. I see potential in you to become either one of the greatest forces of good this world has never known, or a man who will cause unimaginable destruction and leave nothing but death in his wake. And now here I am, faced with the decision to either teach you or deny you. So tell me, if you were in my position what would you do?" - CARTERKANE22dCommenté
is this a translation or an original?
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was waiting for the racism..But chicken country thats new..lol i wonder who they r talking about.
"There are already enough talented warriors in Hanxia Country, and their existence has long affected the safety of our Great Chicken Empire." - CARTERKANE27dCommentéCe livre a été supprimé.
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yes theoretical it should be possible..And would explain his indifference towards his people..Cus for him their death is temporary..Since he will eventually bring them back to life.
When I was born into this world I thought that maybe I can keep so many Quincies from dying in the thousand year blood war arc. There are ways that the war could be avoided, but Yhwach didn't think that everything splitting world into the world of the living, soul society and hueco mundo was what the soul king wanted. He's one of those people who can't respect or understand their parents decision. - CARTERKANE1mthCommentéCh 17 Chapter 17: LostdetailSecond Youngest Son (Swordmaster’s Youngest Son Fanfiction)Anime et bandes dessinées · Mr_Moringstar
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Hope we get to see more unohana and mc..A better relationship.
Unohana Retsu left again because of the Women's Shinigami Association. Now she is the only one who can give Bai Ye some advice and urge Bai Ye to practice. - CARTERKANE1mthCommentéCh 1 Mobile Game
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captain wouldn't have attacked him in the caffe especially since he was with a small kid...And same for Tony he would have most probably talked with the mc also he should have been able to check the cctv or something.And maybe have more interaction with the mc??Feels like he is not talking much.
So, I'm reaching out once more to see if there's anything specific that you think could be improved. Are there grammar mistakes that are bothering you? Are the chapters too short or too long? Are there any issues within the story that you think need addressing? Or is there something else entirely that's on your mind?