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For me the beginning of the story is still complicated but I'll try to make it better, there are only 3 chapters so I still have some room (thanks)
This era of Naruto is not too exploited in the work so I found it logical given that the first war is still ongoing
The novel has a potential, events before the plot, looking for more --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Sorry for my absence, I was on holidays and then, the start of school was a bit complicated. I'm stabilized so I could resume my fanfics with one chapter a day of whatever I want. Thanks and sorry again :3.
She hasn't absorbed it yet, I will make sure she absorbs it with Itachi next to it.
He trains to purify and improve it as much as possible to be able to better use and control abilities.
I will introduce other Stars during the following chapters. I would also like to have Japanese name proposals. I will not give a last name for people who are not Japanese because I have no idea of an English, American or other last name, sorry ! Ideas from Bloodline could also be interesting, otherwise I will take mythological beasts, it will be faster.
idk neither
Sasuke is worse, I let the mangekyou Sharingan influence him slightly so that's okay. He will be less robot in the future xD
He will just have "friends" more like companions. But no friends like Shisui, if you know what I mean.