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.................................................. The Author did a Great Job on writing a story that has some quite unique taste. I really am looking forward to more chapters . From the Writings we know that The Author is new, but we can see that the Author gave their best in writing to it. Thank you for your hard work and hoping for more in the future. keep up the good work. really appreciated as a Reader.
............................................................................. The MC is dense, quite stupid and silly. Interesting Plot, but needs more you know, the spice And also too weird but okay, *turns back to go away* Who ever wrote this, good luck. Wait wait wait... Isn't this my book?! Welp...
The plot is good and the storyline is unique . if I were you I won't try to add things suddenly which you might add or have added on some parts but it's understandable . other than that we can see that you gave your all in the novel, Good Job. also I won't say much cause I'm new too in writing other than that it's Oki Good Luck and Keep it up. I support you.