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Seriously, no one noticed how suspicious Daphne's behavior is? She obviously gave her life force to her sister to be healthier

This chapter was amazing, it made Grindelward much better as a villain, he destroyed himself from other realities just for his own benefit, in addition to the worlds of his other versions that will lose in the war against humanity

Speak for yourself, if you didn't like it just don't read it, there are thousands of fanfics with what you're looking for, just go after them

Congratulations to the author for making another story that follows the same script as all the others, he needs a lot of courage to endure all the criticism about the lack of creativity

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This chapter was amazing, in fact the last ones were too, I just reread one of the first and it's still as good, the emotions and personalities are still very well described, but this one was especially beautiful, the way you expressed the time was just special, it really looked like a pause at the moment of an explosion, and after throwing a magic atomic bomb on Lily's only important thing only closed with a golden key

But I liked this chapter, Nero and Maria were cool characters even if of short duration, and the advance in Harry and Daph's relationship is always pleasant

It would be kind of obvious if the curse of Astoria was the prophecy that Dumbleodore wants to break in hogwarts, I hope it doesn't follow this path

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I didn't like this chapter, not for something personal with the events, but I found it very abrupt, Harry discovers that Lily talked to Dumbleodore and automatically she cuts relationships with him, and acts as if he was doing it, maybe you wanted to have written it that way, but while I read it only gave me the impression that Lily was doing everything against Harry for no reason, he was not the pivot of this fight, he didn't even really contest her