AEatingGoat

the story is well paced and executed really well, has alot of room for creativity (making use of different and bizzare concepts) as the story isn't bound by the Characters living on there original World.

don't make the quote "Monkey see monkey do" true

logically speaking....wait sorry you are unable to comprehend logic...cause if you were your parents would have been proud of you....the only thing I'm worried about is how your kids will be even more idiotic than you (don't worry you won't be able to compensate for four dumbass by finding a smart person, noone in there right mind will give you the time of the day) I'm having a feeling that this isn't your fault...your Parents specially your dad should have been careful to not nut inside a Hooker knowing full well that he will be creating a dumb MF'er. (I called your Mom names, I'm clarifying cause I don't think your Dumbass will understand this) what can I expect from someone who was commenting on someone's LN knowing full well his own grammatical application is Fuck.ed up....you are the reason there are rules stating that failing someone in Kindergarten shouldn't be something that should be done. things that you can improve Upon 1) Life, (this will take some time, but you'll get there), 2) Profanities ( I mean, it's something you should work on seeing how the only comeback you had was that, you know writing that and saying you read my reply was like Accepting I'm Preaching the TRUTH) 3) Grammer (specially if you wanna walk down this path of Correcting others; You son of a Who......I mean kid). *I won't go easy on ya next time.....you are a decade too Early to start a argument over the internet....now don't go starting one irl you'll get your ass cheeks clapped*

And it didn't make sense to me how an Animal....monkey to be more specific, Who should have Kept quiet and stick to peeling others Banana (I think I wrote something that'll go over your head, I'm not good at taking into account Low IQ) came to reading a LN and then trash Talking.... The day you mature Just a little bit will be the day that your Parents regret will lessen A LITTLE. But no worries mate You'll be free from your own stupidity in what, like 50 years yeah that sounds about right, cause it's the stupid ones that survive the longest..... Humans have evolved to a point where Natural selection isn't that big of a deal.... Cause if it were. Reflect on yourself..... This is something you should really consider as it's comming from a fellow animal one which is smarter and a little more mature than you.

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mc= Akaliba

MC's reaction to purification of body is the exact reaction someone who doesn't know about Cultivation manhua or something like that would have 😂 sparring partner.....mc will soon realise how good these people are or will just dominate him using his battle sense.well I'll know that in the next chap

the mc, even though seeing that apologizing form/technique for the first time..... immidatly felt it's effect and seriousnes in any world, kowtow speaks for itself. I'm pleased by the fact that you added a scene like this.

2 chaps back when the Akilaba was first saved, all I wanted was to scavenge those corpses for loot as literally anything relating to Cultivation or 💰 would be beneficial. after reading this chap I feel a weird sense of accomplishment. the chap was great and I knew that the old man from before who lost his hand will come play a vital role ....Im just too smart.