Macintosh0_1

The writing is very descriptive and paints a vivid scene of the background in the reader's head, while grammar is good, though, I'd heavily recommend trimming some paragraphs down, as walls of text are not pleasant to read on mobile, especially. The story has a hint of mystery and a good emotional impact in some of the chapters. I'd recommend this story to anyone looking for a work free of cliches and immature tropes. Good job.