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  • Souka37
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    I should say that there are several expositions. I think there's a reason why you wrote those(obviously). Anyway, there is already an enemy introduction. He's kinda OP, not gonna lie. To sum it all, the novel has a great start. A great start equals a great story. Keep up the good work and good luck.

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  • Souka37
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    It is a decent novel. You can easily imagine what is happening at the novel through the novel's descriptive dialogues. The development is still on the way. The grandfather's strength was the most surprising here. I didn't expect it.

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