sorry T had to use the cheap free aI art. T.T

MC

Obed

o I like the criticism, of the 6 stories I'm writing, I only have like 3 reviews, so I actually do appreciate it, my reply was for clarification if nothing else, as for the misspell words I do try to edited as much as possible but some do slip through, it's funny... if you read my earliest work/ chapter they are of lesser quality then the later ones, so I feel like at least I'm improving xd, like if you read forsaken satyr... you would see it for sure, even though I did make some slight changes to that one, or my warcraft fanfiction or my Warhammer one, if you do decide to check out the forsaken satyr one out, note that I "put on the self" so to speak, since it failed to get ppl attention, it's needs a lot of reworks. [ back then my word limit was 500 words to 1k... man I feel like such a numb xd]

OH! as for grammer... ya still working on that.... English hard! Grammerly cost to much and using Google docs plus outlook free word is the best I can do atm

Thank you for the review:), but I do feel the need to point that every word is not random, but I get how it may seem that way, as for the multiple pov, I originally wasn't going to do that, heck I even asked if the readers if they wanted me to stop doing that and only focus on the aliens. [ didn't actual aspect the book to balloon as it did, expected a small reader base] because I also know how annoying it can be, as for the way the world works, I didn't go into as much because of the word limit I set, around 2kish, I didn't want to bore the reader with an expedition dump. so, I tried to tie it in slowly in the multiple POV. In the end, I chose the multiple POV mainly to show case the horrors of alien rather then individual development other than for Aaron and kippley because I plan to at least give him the heros journey, as for kipple the revenge plot along with the troll child. Breder character was all ways planned to be simple because I got so tried of reading the same type of MC, most novel I've read, it's either Mc dumb, weak to strong cringe, or so strong but has way to many side chick's. [ side chicks eat the bulk of the story] so I gave him a simple to understand dynamic that play great with a genocide type monster, I didn't want to write an MC geting use to killing etc... / scard idiot type trying to understand reincarnation etc.. [which also involve a lot of cliche boring expedition dump at the start of most novels] after reading 300 plus novel its does get tired some.... either way I thank you again for the review! I'm glade you like the pictures!

I have no idea who that is... guess I'll give a quick google

cet scubi form

how I invision laurna

random elf

random elf

almost cet

concept

concept

concept

cet with the right color eyes

cetra