OriosGrafeas

Dude just drop it then, it's not that big of a deal. Though I do appreciate the honesty, so thanks for that. But if you have so much to complain about, just drop it if you haven't already. This isn't a serious progress and is simply something I write to practice. Looking back, I can see all the mistakes I've made and that's perfectly fine because it's not a serious project and I learn from from these mistakes

I completely understand, I'm not an American and where I come from we call it football as well. I use soccer so people don't get things confused and to avoid the unneeded issues that may come with people who see the need to say something dumb. so yeah

Bye

Oh yeah. Good point. My bad

Okay, then stop. Not saying it in a mean way or anything, but if you dont like something, there is no point in continuing. I wrote this for fun so it's not meant to be super serious, so if that's what you're looking for, this likely isn't the story for you. If you have to complain on every chapter, then just drop the book, it's just that simple.

I'm really not sure what you're talking about. I'm pretty sure I've made it clear that the mc is a girl. The pink suit refers to a dress of some kind. the ballerina type, hence the tutu. I'm not sure where I've made mistakes when it comes to her gender and I have no issue with you pointing them out for me

Hello, I'm glad you like this. Don't worry I haven't stopped I've just been busy is all. I'm actually working on the next couple of chapters and I hope it doesn't take me so long. I think you're my first review for this story so I'm incredibly grateful you had something positive to say. I hope I don't disappoint you further down the line.

If only my life was that exciting. sorry for not updating in forever, but I had a musical to write so I couldn't do much about my fanfics. the musical took me forever because the story they wanted is not the type of thing I'm used to writing so it took a lot of tries for me to get something good. I finally finished writing in some days ago and now I'm back to working on my fics. if it makes you feel any better, I already have one chapter written and the next almost halfway complete. 39 is an ugly number so I'll post when I have the second chapter completed

I really appreciate the kind words and I'm happy I did such a good job. It's hard for me to feel as if I've accomplished anything with my writing and often times it feels like the things I write aren't very good overall so this really makes my day. I'm glad you enjoy the story and I never thought I would make it this far considering I only wrote this as practice to sharpen my skill and just to have fun expressing my imagination. Really, I can't express how happy this makes me and I will strive to keep my content enjoyable