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RC11384 days agoCommentéin one chapter, it's hyuuga fuji then Uchiha Fuji. I guess MC gone to another fiction...
- RC11384 months agoCommenté
Hello, in my opinion, sub-titles between paragraphs interrupt the flow of the story. I suggest to removal of them.
- RC11384 months agoCommenté
Characters name is different than summary? Is it Nathan or Ethan?
- RC11388 months agoCommenté
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- RC11389 months agoCommenté
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- RC11389 months agoCommenté
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- RC113810 months agoCommenté
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- RC1138a year agoCommenté
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- RC1138a year agoPosté
Good Story. it pulls you in. Thanks.....