Luffy7575

About the fanfic Volume 1...Writing Quality: Well translated fanfic. Author did a well job in translation adding some content of his own.Story development is good. I really liked it. Nothing seems to be rushed or forced, thats is good.Character Design: All the characters are good and nothing seems to be forced or rushed.MC is a transmigrated with a cheat system. And the system is quite good.I don't know yet ; if it copy something or maybe it's stolen but it's good.Update stability: So fas so good. 1 chapter per day without delay seems good.I hope you make it to 2 chapters per day.

If you have already posted the other version on patreon than its fine..maybe the same thing with the japanese name would look good.. Mu Xiaoxiao isn't really an good name to use in a japanese fanfic to be honest, Ultimately, its your choice. Even if you don't want to add anything, it is fine..I will be happy as the story is good.

Slow pace, But makes sense....All characters are about the same as the anime.

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Nice one

Good work

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Thnx for the chapter

Mc gets transmigrated to Douluo and gets a goldfinger goddess diary . So, he have to complain in the diary about anything and he would be able to get many rewards, what he didn't know was that that ... In short female characters could read what he wrote. Much better than the other one where nothing happens, I hope it won't be bland like that one.......

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