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Austin_B_1332

Austin_B_1332

Lv15
2021-04-03 JointCanada
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  • Austin_B_1332
    Austin_B_13322 years ago
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    I've enjoyed the story so far. I haven't read far enough to give an accurate review but I do love the power system. James' manual is interesting and I'm excited to see how his power develops. I just have a couple questions about the school itself. Why are the class sizes so small? Is there a reason for that?

  • Austin_B_1332
    Austin_B_13322 years ago
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    I have enjoyed the novel so far. The mc was really annoying for the first few chapters but his character has improved over the course of the novel. I wish that more than one chapter was released a day as the chapters feel too short. Highly recommend reading it.

  • Austin_B_1332
    Austin_B_13323 years ago
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    Love the story. Most VR webnovels have too many numbers and fights that last forever. This novel doesn't do that. The fights are not too long or too short and the fights don't use numbers very often to show damage. The characters are well designed and fun to follow. Highly recommend the story.

  • Austin_B_1332
    Austin_B_13323 years ago
    Répondu à XKARNATION

    I understand. University can take a lot of time away from you. Keep up the good work

  • Austin_B_1332
    Austin_B_13323 years ago
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    I really enjoy the story. The grammar is good and I like the main character's personality. My only problem is the update stability. One chapter a week is so little for a chapter that isn't that long.

  • Austin_B_1332
    Austin_B_13323 years ago
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    Amazing story so far. It is well written and had interesting characters. There are a couple grammatical errors where the word he is used for a female character but this doesn't take away from the story in a massive way. I would highly recommend the story.

  • Austin_B_1332
    Austin_B_13323 years ago
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    I have really enjoyed the story so far. The mc has a great personality. She manipulates people very well. I also love her Teleportation ability. Most of the time teleportation is described as having an image of the place you want to Telenor formed. In this story, she turns her body into fast moving atoms with allows for a lot more versatility. Overall, I would recommend the story.

  • Austin_B_1332
    Austin_B_13323 years ago
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    So far I'm really annoyed with the story. The mc is stupid. The things he says as well as his actions annoy me so much for some reason. He has a weak personality that makes me feel like he will constantly be pushed around. There are also several Grammer errors although it's readable and not nearly as bad as some of the stories on this app.

  • Austin_B_1332
    Austin_B_13323 years ago
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    I honestly hated the few chapters that have been released so far. The main character is overpowered but he gets pushed around easily and is a complete idiot. I find the mc terrible and annoying. Some people might like a stupid mc but not me.

  • Austin_B_1332
    Austin_B_13323 years ago
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    I have enjoyed the story a lot. Everything flows well and is easy to read. One thing I'm confused about is how the characters get stronger. I don't know if I'm missing something or if it just hasn't been revealed yet. I also hope that this doesn't become a harem. I don't want to see the mc with a bunch of girls. Overall the story is well written and I would highly recommend it.