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TheMasterNovice6dCommentéBob Uchiha Marcus Senju Naruto Gremory
Victor Zenin sounds even worse.'- TheMasterNovice20dRépondu à CILinkz
who said anything about veganism? vegetarian and vegan food are different
Add lard. - TheMasterNovice20dCommenté
it just adds to the charm
Men who can cook are really handsome! - TheMasterNovice20dRépondu à waterworld771
it's literally a bloodline ability in Food Wars
"After all, the quality of any dish and the goodness of any ingredient cannot escape my god's tongue analysis!" - TheMasterNovice21dRépondu à WaitWhoWhat
Yes.
The aroma of the beef and the charcoal smoke could be smelled. Even Rindō Kobayashi, who was close by, was appetizing! - TheMasterNovice21dRépondu à Weavile_3900
Of course everyone knows that. But Shinomiya and Eishi are from completely different generations, their generation is at least a decade apart. Also, the 1st Seat (like all the seats) are constantly changing - The way you worded your comment implies that it took at least a decade for a new 1st Seat to appear.
Ranked only after Shinomiya, she was considered a prominent figure in the entire Totsuki Culinary Academy! - TheMasterNovice3mthCommenté
Alright. Calm down, Epstein Uchiha. 😵💫😖🤢🤮💀
Finally, he had a day off today and could chat with his future wife, Karin, and play games. - TheMasterNovice3mthRépondu à Tr0uble_Maker
That is fanfiction material.
This relatively unknown female ninja in the Naruto series, named 'Misaki,' is the first Jōnin willing to accept the "childbearing" mission so far! - TheMasterNovice3mthCommenté
I doubt that, TBH. While civilians hire ninjas to do various jobs, there are still cheap and/or poor people that would be more than glad to use alternatives for explosive tags such as gunpowder. Gunpowder most likely exists, it's just that it's not that useful against ninjas.
But there is no gunpowder. - TheMasterNovice9mthCommentéCh 6 Ch.6: Legacy
- TheMasterNovice9mthRépondu à DragoncloserCh 6 Ch.6: Legacy
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Writing Quality 4/5: There are minor grammar mistakes, but they are very miniscule.Story Development 4/5: Personally, until we reach the Draconic Ruins Realm, then I doubt that the path would diverge too much from TDG's plot.Character Design 4/5: Fairly intelligent. Too slow of a cultivation though. I also wished he was more cunning.Updating Stability 4/5: This is based on how your updates back then.World Background 4/5: I normally score TDG fanfics with 3/5-stars since they don't really delve into world-building. However, you added your own flare into this and it's decent.
- TheMasterNovice9mthRépondu à MikeKungCh 2 God Ranking
- TheMasterNovice9mthCommenté
Tang San has no proper life experience as an adult in his previous life. All he knows is the Tang Sect. It's really annoying when people like the translator talk about Tang San's idiotic perspective without understanding how he developed his perspective; it just shows how hypocritic they are regarding that.
(T/N: Yeah right, the man's an adult in a child/teens body! And he is not 'experienced enough'?) - TheMasterNovice9mthCommenté
What happened to the Profound Flame Demonic Tiger's Spirit Ring?
He currently only has his Left Arm and Right Leg Bone that has not fused with a Spirit Bone, and his Netherworld God Tiger Martial Spirit also has Two-Spirit Rings left before it reaches its peak. And he knows that those remaining Spirit Rings will come from 100,000 Year Spirit Beasts that will certainly leave behind 100,000 Year Spirit Bones, so why would he look at this 80,000 Year Spirit Bone when he has a better alternative? - TheMasterNovice9mthCommenté
On average, the Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon probably is the Mainland's Strongest Beast Spirit.
"I also want to see the power of the Mainland's Strongest Beast Spirit." Chen Feng smiled faintly. The Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon was called the Mainland's Strongest Beast Spirit, though he was pretty sure that it is nothing before his Netherworld God Tiger. - TheMasterNovice9mthCommenté
this epitomizes the: "intelligent mc"-tag
The reason he is auctioning Shi Nian's Spirit Bone is that Shui Yuan's Spirit Bone is of the Power System and is more adaptable and versatile, which is why he is going to keep Shui Yuan's, Spirit Bone. As for Shi Nian's Spirit Bone, it is only suitable for Auxiliary and Illusion System Spirit Masters, it does not have a greater effect as Shui Yuan's, therefore, he is going to auction it. - TheMasterNovice9mthCommenté
it's fictional, get over it
(T/N:Lol, the cringe… has anyone here seen Bollywood movies where the male and female run into each others arms with their arms outstretched and flapping like dying birds? Yeah, that's exactly the image I had in my head when reading and translating this.) - TheMasterNovice9mthPosté
Writing Quality 4/5: It's decent. Stability of Updates 4/5: For when he was still active. Story Development 3/5: It's alright. Character Design 3/5: The MC is just alright. World Background: I don't why you have Japanese names in a universe where the universal language is Chinese. English names are fine as well since they appeared in the story, but Japanese names? Hell nah. You should've just stuck with the Chinese language.