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I think jus explaining his strenghts or having like a system stats bar show in the chapter before the fight or when he awkaned would've been better. more information of what his families power is would seem to me like a good choice but you did a good job on the chapter!
to be completly honest the fight scene was mediocre, and not telling us about his powers before hand really ruined the fight. If you went ahead and explained his powers and even mentioned htem in the fight before it happened this would've been way better. You also mentioned the grace family ability without saying what it is. You should include what that is next time you make a similiar chapter.
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did you get this idea from soul land?