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"I am with you, I am with you"? ??
ohhh??? did you have a storage ring or something? or did you hide it under the t-shirt? lemme ask if the hospital gave you patient gown to wear or not?
Honestly, its like naming a "big dog with black spots on white fur" as Big Spot Black.... So AWKWARD!!
hasn't come to this stage but it can be predicted from previous chapters that there is a well founded history in making for a good romance genre. And just a reminder, mc is not of the horny, perverted or the active skirt chaser kind where all beautiful woman is a target of harem in case you didn't read before.
The story is undoubtedly one of the most attentive one. It could be see how much attention the author gave to complete it. It has very awesome character design AND smooth plot fluidity. BUT the obvious logic holes present is the reason for this low review. For example: "Mutants don't eat each other and plants are also mostly mutants", then how did they survive?? Mutants can procreate faster than they die out of starvation!!! Thats stupid! How can they procreate if they don't even have the energy to survive? Give me my law of conservation of mass and energy back! Another example: "Those who die in future also die(being vegetative is almost equal to death) after loading" ALSO "It cost 5% XFE to load AND energy can be recovered in the past". Doesn't that mean that you can just kill till out of ammo -> load to point where you can recover almost all energy you spend in battle -> kill the remaining ones and rinse and repeat! Weak? you are a one man army with a god level stealth cheat bro!!
Well its better than the most mysterious and profound country "CHINA" where any random person might be stronger than Dumbledore because of there "mysterious" means, isn't it ?
That called an order for restaurant 🤣
Umm that's not realistic.. Was there not a single deserter ? There should have been some and judging that mc took arrows to his body they could have escaped.
This novel takes HEAVY inspiration from "Little tyrant doesn't want to meet a bad end".. .Not that I'm complaining cause I loved every second of LTTB and loving every second of this one too 😊. .. The author did his work to make different characters, world building and story development that it feels different enough to become a great read, great job author 👍
An exciting journey for me.. the fact that novel was free did helped though One of most convincing harem story out there and definitely one of top two in my list of Naruto fanfiction... I am both happy and sad for the end of this wonderful journey and also grateful to the author for this beauty ☺️ PS: A Sequel is always appreciated ty
Well I'll assume it to be dropped...... (after some cursing later)——— Thank you it felt good, I'm just gonna go ahead and remove it from my library. Still thanks for the novel so far, I loved it
This was fun... thank you author for not giving up on the book. You should know how many of the novels get dropped for various reasons and makes permanent cliffhangers - they suck btw, well anyway, the joy I felt after completing it was intoxicating and the ending was also superb... Again thank you for the fanfiction 😀
Chapter 7 Do or die ---- Ary raised his gaze with his purple gaze filled with anger, Ary glared at Wolfra, asking, "Who gave you the right to take life when you don't have power to return it" Ary with the support of his blade, finally, stood up, and asked, "You'll pay..... you'll definitely pay for this!!!!" . ---- Unfortunately SS. MoonlitBlackcat couldn't stand the frozen mass of hypocrisy and raging waves of cringe, sinking into the warm deeps of other realistic novels never to be seen at this location again. ( This is SS. MBC's final log before sinking )