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Definitely this one if you add a third just makes more sense than the others listed.

I honestly don't understand how weak Artemis is acting in this chapter she could have easily used the arrow right away and then she spirals in the middle of a very important battle where she knows she is the target. She is a goddess of the hunt and would never act like this mid battle and would just push her weird to her feelings down till the battle is done.

Great story so far please continue. It honestly rare to see sirzechs actually take action in a fanfic and I hope you continue with these kinds of ideas

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Cool start so far I'm looking forward to how this world works.

Thanx for the chapter still a great story so far wish the chapter was a bit longer but I'm not going to complain about getting good content.

Great chapter really love how mc is always outsmarting people and can't wait to see what you plan to do next.

Issei plot armour strikes again to save him