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I don't know, maybe...[img=recommend]
Yes, Anti-hero with a really morally ambiguous behavior.
He's not going to be a Hero, that's for sure. [img=recommend]
I appreciate the word of encouragement[img=recommend]
I will certainly keep writing, so I hope you keep staying tuned![img=recommend]
I'm glad that you liked my writing style, been working on that. Also, I'll make sure that the novel will keep getting better, so stay tuned!
The writing quality is solid, but there are some readability issues. Some dialogues are dull but still get the purpose straight. Story and world background development are limited with only 10 chapters, so there's still not much anything to say. But I'm sure it's going to get a lot better, keep up the good work!
A heartbreaking start.
Love the story, and the conversation is natural and not dull.