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I don't know if you knew this but there's already a pretty well done translation on webnovel of the story you've uploaded and it's been updated to 540 chapters.
This sounds like a chinese fanfic, if it is please at least credit the original (by mentioning the original chinese name or a link to the mtl/raws in your synopsis) else it just comes off as disingenuous like you're trying to take credit for someone else's work. If this is indeed your original work then I will take back whatever I said.
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Out of all the several fate/typemoon fanfics I've read till date this one has the best mc. I like his snarky, whimsical personality and the way he just plays off of everyone else while the other characters from what I see act really close to what they would in the original. Not sure if this is an original fanfic or it's a translation (if it is a translation, mighty fine job!) but I'm looking forward to where this ends up and really hoping this one ends up being completed and not abandoned
You can probably just combine two or three chapters into one, cause the original chapters are short as hell.
Hey, good luck man! Hope you land that deal and make that bag.
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