Freyr4Frost

thank you, I'll make sure to do my best for this volume and the next ones

Saitama vs Magneton fight is pretty epic, and saitama ending up naked (as in canon) and being as angry for the potatoes as for the people is just too fun ngl. Also poor guy thinking a power with a name stolen from db would be enough... sad for him ngl

Wow first, holy shit the headshot at the very beginning was completly unexpected. Then turnner having no chill was really cool too (capturing, menacing and killing a guy first chap bro really cold, no wonder he's wanted) Overall really liked the beginning, and the mysteries about the crown and the queen's protectors, i see no reason not to give it a nice 5stars to help

Thank you, I always try to make my mcs really smart to compensate their flaws. Can you give me a quick review for me to know on which aspect to work please?

Ok I've read the first chapter and I can already say the story is good. The first person with Connor is well-done, and i really like the way he decribe his situation, it makes him feel real and not some zero-personnality character. Also i'm not going to lie, even if he was introduced in the same chap, seeing kirk getting punched in the face and taking a giga karma was hella satisfying, just that alredy enough for the 5 stars no-joke <:

Writing is really good, it's not heavy or anything, the world and the plot seem interesting with just the right amount of mysteries, and Marlon saying that nothing is free in this world was pretty impactful. Overall very good beginning though i'd have to say the switch between 1st and 3rd person are kinda confusing to me

I'd like to look into it, can you please send me the link of this webpage?