So the real ones have been kidnapped. Well, there goes all the progress with Sable. Will need to conquer her again.

MC is too overly reliant on the system. I'd like to see him try to do something on his own tbh.. There is no depth so far to the novel, whether with him, or his girls.

Bro, isn't he at nascent soul? How did he even hide it?...

Haven't seen anything yet. Half the novel is written with AI.

They have the same stats.. How can they be so blown out of proportion? Do stats even matter anymore?

Ehh.. well, spirit queen or not, who cares if she joins the harem or not? No value if everything is skipped.

Much too soon. It was literally few chaps ahead, and apparently even 500 chaps later they haven't reunited. Forgotten char in trash novel in the end.

Yeah i spoke too soon. Got worried for a bit, but i'll trust your ways.

I really like your novel since it suits my kinks. My gripe is with avoiding cliches, where everyone goes on their way instead of trying to be together, like many authors do. Other than that, i don't really have much to add. You're doing good and i enjoy reading it. Even the MC shows growth. Keep it up.

This was the most boring thing i have ever seen. Stop dragging things out for the purpose of dragging them out. You really used AI to generate the chapter just to drag it out? man.. write your own content, i skipped most of this worthless chapter. It really doesn't add anything but annoyance.. I feel like your first thought is how to drag everything further, and you even use AI trash to do it..

Ehh.. why lie on reflex?. Wasn't ge going to be honest with his own? I don't see the point in hiding such important things from his closest family.

Again. dragon, cave, dragon, cave.. This is getting too repetitive.. it's not how you write smut.

I see, so the path of the scum. He could take her as a concubine or mistress or something. I just hope there will actually be harem, instead of running around, taking women and leaving them behind to their lives.

AI story boosted by bots using AI content. no thx.

Even so, he still loved more than 50 lives. All over 5000 years, to reach divine realm and such.

There are 40 dem0n states... elves, dwarves, humans, vamps, dragons, catkins, birdkins, etc etc.. just those add up to at least 50 races. So you got 500.000 years just there. Then the lives he spent with techniques, with and without system, with all bloodlines.. add another 50.000 years.. Let's round it up to 500.000. Not tens of thousands, but hundreds of thousands. Idk what this author thinks or what's in his head to not even make the math..

Honestly, i'm not sure i like this corruption arc. It seems like the women are getting posessed, and forced to do things they wouldn't normally do. There was already an NTR alert, and now it seems like every time MC looks away, the girls might jump eachother behind his back. Feels like he is no longer in control, which is giving me a bad taste, while nothing really happens in the forest.

My advice for the future is to not separate the family. When MC goes to the academy, Lyra can do the same, and they can use the sect as their home. They can do their own things during the day, but they should all return home and spend the nights together. Seraphina also shouldn't go into the tower on her own for long periods of time. Maybe during the day or something, and return for dinner. I kinda dislike the novels that introduce chars at first, only to separate and forget them later on. As for the smut, i think any scene can be handled within 2 chaps, there shouldn't be a need for more, regardless of the scene.

Nice. With all this cultivation knowledge, he should also help his mother advance. He has to be more open with his women, and help them sincerely. Especially now that he has all the knowledge he needs to do it, far more than his mother has.

Wait.. so her mother got beaten and forced by another... Is she enslaved or something? Would be nasty if she got used by others.. Hopefully it's a one time thing, and something to get revenge for..