Tacosrule123

Warning to anyone that's even considering reading this novel. This Author has a habit of writing super good novels. But, he/she will drop it and never pick it up again.

I have read the first two chapters and there are SOOO many grammar mistakes it's very hard to read. Author, I suggest using a site like Grammarly to do a spellcheck on your work. Since, it's very hard to read at the moment.

You are stupid. You said you are religious earlier.... So, are you religious or are you not? Since now it just seems like a petty excuse and you just are to lazy to finish the story.... You also apparently dropped all your previous stories for similar reasons....

Love the novel and hope someone else picks this up and continues writing. The Author wants to drop it since he just "found god." That is one of if not the most disgusting thing someone can say. Author is dropping it since DC/Invincible comics have characters that are gay and it goes against his religion since he just found god. Respectfully author never write a novel again since you will just keep disappointing people. One tip before I leave, don't let religion tell you what you can read or write about. It's your life and I doubt god would care.....

I saw this novel since it's free for the day. After looking at some of the other reviews I didn't think the novel is going to be that bad. After reading 10 chapters some some parts seemed a little bit forced to be honest like how the MC's family believes he stole money so they kicked him out. At that time he is only 7 years old and truthfully. Who would believe a 7 year old can steal that much money.... There are other parts of the story that honestly just makes me feel like I am becoming dumber the more I read. Besides that, the background of the world is not really all that known yet. Apparently it has technology and crap but the MC never once mentions stuff like TVs, AC, and other appliances which just makes it stupid. After he got kicked out most of the staff wanted to follow him since he spoiled the crap out of them. But, he than denied them out of stupid reasons which are not even mentioned. Furthermore, because of this he isn't able to get any form of living now since he has no I.D. but if he just allowed them to follow he would of been fine and the story could of progressed sooner instead of taking a forced 180......

I enjoy the story also so far. But, this was just stupid not going to lie. As you said he is only 7 years and it feels like the Author was just stuck on how to progress so he just made something really stupid happen which makes zero sense.....

Grammarly is free if you haven't been using it already. But, Grammarly will not switch the genders for you. Since it should be common sense even if English is your second language. The reason why I say that is it is pretty obvious to tell how he looks like vs she and etc.

Considering the fact that there is a spelling mistake in the title alone makes me believe that this novel will have a TON of spelling mistakes.

My god learn to use paragraphs