Lithkren
Just someone who wants to write casual stories Contact at lithkren.2@gmail.com if you enjoy my work(s?)
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the period is just a way for me to organize my thoughts. my eyesight isnt very good so i put the periods there to help me tell where the breaks are and how many. generally the amount of breaks is how long the "pause" is between story beats or ideas, or at least thats how i try to organize them in my head
Thank you so much! Your comments mean a lot to me, I usually don't get a lot of them lol but it's honestly really nice to get any amount of feedback, even just minor things like spelling mistakes are super helpful
i wish i had the money to comission some art lol
Aisha prefers cuddling face-to-face :3
oop! just a typo, thanks for pointing it out!
Ah, reading back, I realize that you're right - it was my intention to convey that Aisha was losing the fight, (rather badly) but I realize now that I rushed through the scene far too quickly, and have given the impression that Aisha was on top the entire time. I will definitely add and change a few scenes to try to fix this. Thank you for the comment, this was super helpful!
Thanks for the follow up! This is genuinely very helpful for me, and I'm glad you took the time to write. I do rewrite and change chapters of the story often - I'll make them clear in the author notes in the future. But again, thank you for the honest feedback!
no, at least not for the foreseeable future.
ah, my bad. Fixed