Hello! Author here, thank you for pointing them out as I am trying to edit out the earliest chapters while writing the new ones! There are some plot holes as well because of how different the story were from the original, so I apologize if that breaks immersion! :D

Yes! Thank you for pointing some of the few things i’ve missed I’m trying hard to edit stuff as I write but few still escape my attention. Don’t worry, i fix them instantly as they are pointed out, thanks again!

The characters will have interconnecting relationships with the MC and with each other, so yes, eventually.

Hello. Thank you for the praises! And I am in fact the author of this story. I am translating the original book, which I authored as well into Webnovel. :)

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Since this is a novel I am choosing a singular storyline for our MC, Zeke. My original story that is not in webnovel format, is still unfinished and is in a long hiatus. The player can choose various outcomes for any situations of the story. It is a story than is very difficult to code and write at the same time. Since I am still a newbie author writing here gives me more of a breathing room and help keeps my imagination going. **: If you’re still curious about the choice-based stuff and didn’t fully understand what I explained. You can search “Choice of Games” in google and there are a bunch of storybook games there that you can play.

Hello sorry! Yes! I am still trying to iron out the whole story because I am translating the whole thing from the perspective of the viewer, as this was a project of mine which was made as a choice-based story. Thank you for the patience!