Chuffed

I quite like this one it’s well written with a few errors but cmon this isn’t a published novel. Now not sure how the systems going to go but idk the pacing with showing stats is good now abilities I think should be shown again I completely forget what he can spend sp on or what he spent it on. I like the mc they have some depth I just beg they don’t become a cringe antihero but it doesn’t look like it’s going in that direction so I’m eternally grateful. Just some advice to the author your totally going to get hate from the book people if you use the show but who cares just do whatever you think is best.

You guys are actually on cope Annie is only a good low elo champ pick rell instead now that’s an amazing support

We wish but she’s dead

Great overall I don’t usually like universe blending like lotr and hp, but it’s enough to make it interesting but not so much that it isn’t ho anymore. Plot wise It’s honestly above average. People on this site are either normal people or weird harem loving people that only like basic plots.

I just love the story. It feels so original even though it's in the Avatar universe. Author, please don't ever drop this. It has a lot of potential and I'm excited in which direction the story will go.