your saying you know hes not a genius and then say you want him too be a jonin in 1 year thats whats absurd to me....

in 1 year?????????

Stolen hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's a cliche: mc is better then everyone has a harem and will become king. I don't recomend this one. Also idk why you would skip past the entire childhood.

It's OK until the MC awakens and finds out that he's super-duper special and becomes extremely op. You know it would've been fun to see an ordinary person try and start a mafia in a magical world, but you had to make him OP for no reason. hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I read the whole thing on spacebattles and then found it here, so I was surprised that people disliked it. But if you want to know what I feel makes the fic great, it's the slow pace, plus the fact that the MC gets nothing—no wishes, no golden fingers, no systems. Also, I enjoy getting to see konoha from the perspective of someone who is weak, spoiler (the mc has to fight in a underground fight ring and has to deal drugs to get some extra cash. It's just different from most stories, in my opinion a more realistic view of how the average Joe would survive.

It's fine untill blaze get's introduced (has to be 1 of the most annoying characters ive ever seen) and in my opinion the author is to horny for my liking.

Why system hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

This is great. Sad to see all the bad reviews from people that can't handle the fact that the mc isn't overpowered or has an system and all the other op stuff. Not understanding that these things are what makes the fanfic great.

Do what you feel is best it's your story after all.

I wouldve preferred if the mc like actually had a reaction to getting reincarnated but that's just personal preference.

There's 2 types of evil mc ones that are evil and the others are just little shits. This ones a lil to much on the lil shits side for me personnaly but for the rest it's pretty decent.

There's 3 problems for me personally 1 is that the mc just accepts getting reincarneted way to fast at that point just skip the reincarnation part. 2 is that except for his outfit it has nothing to do with bloodorne. and 3rd The dad already has connections with the mad king calling him a good dude wich gives me the ick tbh. Like the idea of someone with bloodborne powers reincarnating into gt sounds really good but this just isn't that.

i meant 3 problems lmao

because thats how a lot of people including me speak.

bruh bro my opinion is the book sucks just leave it at that its cringe. just grow up a couple of years and you will understand i'm not gonna spend more time on this.

are you 12 by chance because no self respecting adult would talk like that or find an mc like that interresting. Its litteraly a gary steu that only kids would find interresting.

the writing is good but the story is cringe the mc has an iq over 180? the mc sure doesnt act like it

The mc doesn't act like a normal human bro. the writing isnt bad but the mc really isnt fun or interesting ad to that that he doesn't take the world sereosly. also the golden finger was unneeded.

I mean that this book is a#s and that you really shouldnt be defending it. Cause the original comment explained it perfectly why its bad.