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Why did you have him wait to get his second spirit ring? Also, he's 9 ranks below Tang San, how will he be able to rival him?
The story seems kind of slow, but I think it could potentially be pretty interesting. The updates are also kind of slow but the chapters aren't extremely short like some other fanfics that I've read. Please continue making more chapters. Douluo dalu fanfictions aren't that common so I really enjoy the few good ones that are on this site.