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I agree with the other guy oc love interest suck and aren't good. Also in the summary you talked about the sharigan being like it was in the og Naruto does that mean no Mangekyo? Because if so it makes no sense that minato wouldn't have utterly destroyed obito I mean he did even with it, no one else would have stood a chance without kamui. So how would the 9 tails attack have happend without some forced plot.

That was kinda annoying if it was that easy to feed a object a devil fruit everyone would know about it. If your just going to make things up just for your character then I'm probably not gonna enjoy this story.

This is what I mean armor is useless when you get to a certain point. I hope he stops with all these useless armor stuff and weak weapons.

I dont see why he cares for the armor when haki or Iron Body is better. He's not the original Don Krieg also you make him sound massive except hes not espeacially in the one piece world. Isn't 2 meters like six and a half feet? It's not that big isn't he supposed to be like 8 feet? Unless your gonna make him taller later.

That means nothing naruto still had way more chakra than a chunin less than a year before he graduates. A chunin is not making more than like one shadow clone naruto was making dozens all the time in og Naruto.

Good chapter.

I dont remeber this story being so AI last chapter kinda put me off for a little bit but I guess this one wasn't as bad hopefuly it lessens more.

Story is good right now, it's so hard to find good Naruto storys anymore their all either cringe AI, translated or a cringe harem. If this story is AI it's good enough that I can't tell.

Naruto should have way more chakra than that, Kakashi said Naruto had at least 4 times more chakra than him without using the fox. And Kakashi has way more chakra than a chunin. Should probably fix that Naruto created like a thousand shadow clones and no chunin or jonin is doing that.

With yin-yang release he should be able to do wood release to. And like you said probably replicate other kekai genkai and sharigan or other eye powers as well.