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It is pretty good for the most part with an easy enough to follow progression that hints at what is to come. I would suggest that around ch 30 you resubmit the application for a contract while remembering to word it in a compelling way that is also true to the core elements of the work. A product pitch if you will. The Academy has some tips on how Not to write one and maybe some guidance on how to do so. I'm out of GT but I will try to remember to spilt my Power Stones between you and Stardust to give you a little boost. Happy Writing
Original Quote was I came, I saw, conquered. At least from what I remember. Might need to double-check the literal translation on it. Regardless the meaning is the same overall.
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Why search yourself when you can just plunder from supreme geniuses? They have learned the ways of their husband the Divine Bandit Emperor of Death.
[img=recommend] One line of the song is missing translation, but good chapter. Plot hooks are being set.
Correction of the previous comment he was not almost going the speed of Light he was almost going 10x the speed of light.
one down.
Rebirth from ashes. All the Phoenix he killed weep from their places in the reincarnation realm.
Translation please