Ri_Yen
Self inserting myself into the mc is not fun. I like being a side character.
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Ri_Yen1mthRépondu à Sozue_NouzenNope. She means it. This is not their 'world'.
Could they have gone back to our world? Did it get sent to some other unknown place? Are they in danger? Did someone kidnap them?- Ri_Yen1mthRépondu à Sozue_Nouzen
There are 2 Emily's, you probably read about them by now. Elina's cousin Emily and a church 9th tier named Emily.
"Come with me." I told Emily that I would;ld need her help. I didn't know where most of our warehouses were in the city. - Ri_Yen1mthRépondu à Sozue_Nouzen
Yeah. He understands that was selfish of him but we would all rather not put our loved ones in danger if we could.
"Oi oi, calm down! I'm sorry! I'm sorry. Don't shoot please." I seriously begged for forgiveness. My future self didn't take her because he was worried. - Ri_Yen1mthRépondu à Sozue_Nouzen
Yeah, fixed it to 'wife'.
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Fixed it.
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Thank You. Fixed it.
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Fixed. TY.
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The current world of the novel doesn't have cars since it's a fantasy world. He is talking about how he used to have cars during his life on earth. This is a past life separate from his current one.
I really miss my cars in most other worlds and my current one didn't have any. Cars are one of my deepest passions so not having seen one fro fro so long, even in my dreams, was depressing. - Ri_Yen1mthRépondu à Sozue_Nouzen
Supposed to 'years'. Fixed it.
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Fixed it.
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Fixed.
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Added it to the top. Just realised how it could have been confusing,
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Fixed it.
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Most people, that aren't commoners, such as nobles and soldiers have inhuman strength.
I grabbed his collar and lifted him slightly off the ground. - Ri_Yen1mthRépondu à Sozue_Nouzen
'a' was supposed to be after the 'was. Fixed it.
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Fixed it to 'we' had.
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Fixed it. TY.
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TY. Fixed It.
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TY. Fixed it.
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4 paragraphs back. Elina asks him.
"I don't know. I didn't talk to her afterward, wasn't really in the mood." I said.