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I loooooooooooove this book. For those that are yet to read, be ready to be wowed

The idea is promising but a few touches need to be made. 1. More paragraphs: Few paragraphs make the work a little overbearing to read so please give paragraphs at most after three to four sentences. 2. Spacing: At the end of certain sentences, there are no spaces giving no difference between the end of a sentence and the beginning of another. Overall, the plot is nice but it needs some editing. Keep up the good work by the way. Writing isn't easy

Thank you for reading. I'll work on it.

I apologize. I'm in school and it's difficult to meet up with writing and school activities

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Nice work Already added to collection Keep up the good work

The synopsis is quite captivating and I love the plot

Wow wow wow wow I must say this story is really addictive. Just a few chapters down and I can't get enough This is a five for me

The synopsis got me hooked and drove me to read the book. Wonderful job

This book is nice. The plot is promising. Good job

I'm not a fan of system novels but I think I'll give this a try. Nice book

Three chapters down and I can't wait to read some more. This is a very interesting plot

Only two chapters and I've sunk deep into the plot. Wonderful job

I love the plot already only with a few chapters in. And Olivia she seems like my kind of person, bring comfy is everything Good job author

This story is quite addictive. I love the characters and the plot. Great story author

I upload twice each day but sometimes I'm unable to meet up with the time difference. I'll work on though. Thank you for reading.

One thing I love in a Female lead is having that bossy and in control life style even though sometimes the life is out of control... Lol I love this book, it's addictive and greatly recommend