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super_15454 years agoPostéIts a story with potential but keeping up with the POV is hard, theres no real dIrection is the story, and theres the fact that everything just suddenlys happens. no build up to anything and no real reactions from the characters to anything that happens to them.
- super_15454 years agoCommenté
Honestly this story has potential but Its kinda all over the place. No real direction yet
- super_15454 years agoCommenté
Its hard to tell POV