I dont understand why she would marry him and put up with that behaviour, i would anull the marriage

No one would just let a man you didnt know get so close so quick , maybe it will make more sense later in the story

I lIke the general story, but the grammer needs some work, asthma doesnt make you pass out, i think it should be have true facts, and strange to hide a problem like that from your mum if you were diagnosed at 15. The grammer was much better in the first chaptet