Jay_Exile
A lazy, bald old man who enjoys reading adventure, martial arts and cyber punk stories. Also avid listener to drum&bass and synth wave.
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Jay_Exile2 years agoCommentéHimself and he needs to be replaced by herself and she since it's referring to Irene.
- Jay_Exile2 years agoCommenté
I believe that you need to use she here instead of he because it's referring to Irene here not Ziel.
- Jay_Exile3 years agoCommenté
Princess Fritz, lol! Prince Fritz, ok.
- Jay_Exile3 years agoCommenté
It should be him not her.
- Jay_Exile3 years agoPosté
Not a story I expected to read but found it enjoyable read nonetheless. Needs a comedy tag and definitely is a possible romcom. The MC is vicious yet more humane than most characters in this novel. Honestly think that this web novel is fantastic enough for more chapters but only time can tell. I highly recommend reading this web novel and enjoying the short 40 chapter binge ride. Adding this web novel to my reading list.
- Jay_Exile3 years agoCommenté
It should be sister not brother in this context.
- Jay_Exile3 years agoCommenté
Young instead of Yong.
- Jay_Exile3 years agoCommenté
It should be She not He starting this sentence
- Jay_Exile3 years agoCommenté
Niece should be used here instead of nephew
- Jay_Exile3 years agoCommenté
He should be used here instead of she